Original: She was nervous while waiting for her.
New: Ameera keep looking at her watch. It is about 10 o'clock, but Sarah had not coming yet as promised to meet at the bus stop at 9.30 a.m. Ameera afraid of getting late to class, she tried to call Sarah for several times but she didn't answer the phone. Finally, Ameera decided to leave first.
This is my first time blogging. Hopefully those who have read my blog can provide assistance and comments for improvement.TQ!
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